Friday 24 June 2011

Plane a Day 23/06/2011





heh, gotta do a jetbike eventually...

3 comments:

  1. Maybe perspective lines could help to make it looking better?

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  2. Plus, I'm not keen on the chunky pencil lines. Looks a smidge 'doodley' but the designs deserve better than doodles. See here:

    http://deckplans.00sf.com/Surron/Stinger_Doug_Chiang.jpg

    Ok, we cant all be Feng Zhu and Doug Chiang but they have simple and effective ways of turning sketches into something more substantial. I suggest you buy some quality gray markers (worth the often high price!) and a nice line pen.

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  3. I concur. I was about to say this on your battleship drawing. It's really cool as a doodle but it needs that extra layer of detail. I know you are doing one a day, but maybe moving up a next step in detail could really help you improve your already cool designs.

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